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6/6/15 自行车!
今天去骑 自行车, 去骑了二十一公里了! (surely there is a mistake here somewhere, haha)
今天是个晴天,不过后来有下了一点雨。
我现在要去超级市场买东西。也许我会买一个瓶啤酒。哈哈
再见!Enjoy your life!
6/6/15 自行车!
今天去騎自行车 [Too English for "I went bicycling today", more natural to say "I bicycled today"], 一去就騎了二十一公里了! I am guessing from your English intent to be, "The moment I went cycling, I went for 21 Km!"(surely there is a mistake here somewhere, haha)
今天晴天日和,[今天天晴 would be the correct grammar. If you want to be in this order, then you must write 今天是晴天. However, you have already said that you went cycling today already in your first line. I hate repeating this. So I rather use an idiomatic expression instead. Gives an air of more elegance]不过后来有下了一点雨。
我现在去超级市场买东西。也许我买一个/枝/樽/瓶/ 啤酒。哈哈
再见!
6/6/15 自行车!
今天去骑自行车, 去骑了二十一公里了! (surely there is a mistake here somewhere, haha)
今天是个晴天,不过后来有下了小一点雨。
我现在要去超级市场买东西。,也许我买一些啤酒。哈哈
再见!
6/6/15 自行车!
今天去骑自行车, 骑了二十一公里! (surely there is a mistake here somewhere, haha)
虽然今天看起来像是晴天,但是后来还是下了一点雨。
我现在要去超级市场买东西,也许我会买一瓶啤酒。哈哈
再见!
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