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Which one do you prefer? Eating at home or Eating at the restaurant. I'm an indoor kind of a guy. I spend most activities in our home because I'm a bit of an introvert and I don't usually go along with groups. So, there's no doubt that I would prefer dining at home over dining in the restaurant. I also want to stress out a couple of reasons why I prefer eating at home. Firstly, I find it much cleaner, since you can see or observe how the food was prepared and this assure me cleanliness for which I am keen with. Unlike in the restaurant, there's no guarantee that the food was prepared properly. Secondly, eating at home is fun because you'll be able to help your family with the preparation and cooking. This also means that you'll be spending more quality time with your family and for me that's a very enjoyable family bonding. For these reasons, I prefer eating at home than eating at the restaurant.
Jun 22, 2015 2:48 PM
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I'm an indoor kind of guy. I spend most of my time at home because I'm a bit of an introvert and do not do well in group settings. That said, I prefer eating at home over dining at a restaurant. A few reasons why I prefer eating at home:

1. I find it to be much cleaner. Since I can see how the food is prepared, I am assured of its cleanliness, which I am keen on. In a restaurant, there is no guarantee that the food was prepared properly.

2. Eating at home is fun because I can help my family with the preparation and the cooking. I can also spend more quality time with them, which is very enjoyable for me!

 

Most of what you wrote is okay as-is. Here are a few things, however:

 

and this assure me cleanliness  

and this assures me of its cleanliness

This also means that you'll be spending more quality time with your family and for me that's a very enjoyable family bonding.

This also means that you'll be spending more quality time with your family, and for me, that's very enjoyable.


For these reasons, I prefer eating at home than eating at the restaurant.

For these reasons, I prefer eating at home over eating at a restaurant.

 

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August 12, 2015
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