Cover letter for workaway, help to to revise it please!

Hello,

My name is Camille and I'm french (with the pretty french accent!). I would like to work in your surfcamp because living with happy souls and surf vides [surfers?] became very important for me, since my last immersion [experience?]  in Central America.

I would love to stay in the Canaries island for a few months, because I really enjoy nature and open space. I love surfing in new dreaming place, walking into the mountains and practicing any water sports. 

Why in an a hostel? Because I'm speaking I speak english, french and spanish, which makes me a very good communicator. Moreover, I am very helpful and friendly. I will be able to manage reception, receive and help people with excursions and reservations. I had have worked as a cashier a few times, which helps(?) what I am saying provides evidence of these skills. 

I was working for cleaning places like houses, surfcamp, camp for kids. I really love the "well-done" work. I am brave, for example I was travelling 5 months alone, managing every kind of troubles in Central America. I like to learn new stuff ('stuff' is a bit too informal) [skills/ things]  and new work missions [experiences?]. I am not scared of what I don't know.

I was a graphic designer for a few years and will be able to be photographer or making make you some designs. Today, I want to discover working in tourism works and feel happy in the right place.

I looking forwards to hearing from you,

Best Regards


> I am listening for other ways to say the same ideas. Tell me what seems weird for you!

the words in these [ ?] signs are because I wasn't sure what you were trying to say, sorry! hope this helps 

Cover letter for workaway, help to to revise it please!
Hello,

My name is Camille and I'm French (with the pretty French accent!). I would like to work in your surfcamp because living with happy souls and surf videos has becaome very important for me, since my last immersion (suena un poco raro, pero no estoy seguro de lo que quiere decir, lo siento!) in Central America.

I would love to stay in the Canaries island for few months, because I really enjoy nature and open spaces. I love surfing in new dreaming places (dreamy new places ???), to walk into the mountains and practicing any sport waters watersports.

Why in an hostel? Because I'm can speaking English, French and Spanish, which makes me an very good excellent communicator. Moreover, I am very helpful and friendly. I will would be able to manage reception, receive advise and help people with excursions and reservations. I hadve worked as cashier few times, which helps(?) what I am saying (?? no lo entiendo).

I was have workeding for cleaning places like houses, at a surfcamp and a camp for kids. I really love to take pride in my work the "well-done" work (bonito pero raro). I am (very?) brave, for example I was travelleding for 5 months alone in Central America, managing and overcoming every kind of troubles problem. I like to learn new stuff skills and new work missions relish the challenge of new responsibilities (??). I am not scared of what I don't know (and am also very resourceful ??).

I was a graphic designer for few years and will would be able to be do photographicer work or to create making you some designs (for your business ??). Today, I want to discover tourism works I am interested in exploring and learning new skills in the tourism area and of course to feel happy in the right place.

I looking forwards to hearing from you,

Best (Kind ??) Regards

> I am listening for other ways to say the same ideas. Tell me what seems weird for you!

Mucha suerte con el trabajo :-))