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Some people think that a high salary is the most important factor in choosing a job Some people think that a high salary is the most important factor in choosing a job. Others, however, believe that job security is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. ------------------------- Nowadays, when you want to find a job, people argue that which one is more important: a high salary or job security? I try to analyze these two point views. A high salary means a lot. Firstly, people would have enough money to spend and keep higher life standard. Secondly, in general, a good salary equals a good company. It’s obviously that the company is quite successful. Last but not least, individual status is protected and can be better in future. Therefore, more and more people pursue a high salary that’s quite reasonable. However, some people only have low education, which means most of them don’t get into university before. So, they only have few chances to choose their career. It’s possible that it can be some dangerous jobs, like fireman, mining worker or builder. Since that they care about the job security, it’s reasonable as well. Nevertheless, I believe that people should study hard to improve their ability, getting university degree at least. Then they can be more opportunity to choose what they want. In fact I do trust that interest is the most significant thing. Money is important but is not the most important thing in your life. Only if people do some job that truly arouse their passion, they will feel happy and keep longer. Life is precious and happiness is crucial. In conclusion, I believe interest is the most important factor when you choose a job. Safety is a basic request and a high salary is less important thing.
Aug 26, 2015 2:56 AM
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Some people think that a high salary is the most important factor in choosing a job

Some people think that a high salary is the most important factor in choosing a job. Others, however, believe that job security is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, when you want to find a job, people argue that which one is more important: a high salary or job security? I try to analyze these two viewpoints.

A high salary means a lot. Firstly, people would have enough money to spend and to maintain higher standard of living. Secondly, in general, a good salary equals a good company. It’s obviously that the company is quite successful. Last but not least, individual status is protected and can be improved in the future. Therefore, it is quite reasonable that more and more people pursue a high salary that’s quite reasonable.

However, some people only have a low education, which means most of them won't get into university before. So,  They only have few chances to choose their career. It’s possible that it will have to be some dangerous jobs, like fireman, mining worker or builder. Because of this, they care about the job security. This is reasonable as well.

Nevertheless, I believe that people should study hard to improve their ability, getting university degree at least. Then they can have more opportunity to choose what they want. In fact I do trust that interest (I don't know what you are talking about) is the most significant thing. Money is important but is not the most important thing in your life. Only if people have a job that truly arouses their passion, they will they feel happy and keep longer (not sure what you mean). Life is precious and happiness is crucial.

In conclusion, I believe interest is the most important factor when you choose a job. Safety is a basic request and a high salary is less important thing.

 

*Overall, good job!  I understood most of what you were saying.  

August 26, 2015
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