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why I want to learn English? below is my opinions. English is an international language. It's a bridge to the world. 1. I need to use English for my work. Many foreign traders and financial workers need to use English. Studying English is important for my future, so I must learn English well. You can hear it all over the world. 2. Watching movies and reading English novels My aim is in order to improve the quality of the life if I study English, I can communicate with foreign friends. 3. Integration into the global community If you don't learn English, you cannot integrate into the world. It is like being illiterate. You won't be able to see many beautiful places in the world. 4. You won't get lost when you visit foreign countries If you want to visit beautiful foreign places and eat different kinds of cuisine, you have to learn English. 5. You will stay young when you learn English. If you look at Chinese culture, most is old-fashioned Chinese culture. Our modern life is the same as in foreign countries. If you read about foreign cultures, you'll find that this world's customs are similar to foreign countries. 6. Communication and making friends If you learn a different language, you will be able to talk to people who can speak that language. If you only speak Mandarin, you will only talk to people who can speak Mandarin. Thank my teacher Efi for helping me to correct some wrong sentences!
Sep 16, 2015 2:42 PM
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why I want to learn English? Below are my opinions.

English is an international language. It's a bridge to the world.
1. I need to use English for my work.
Many foreign traders and financial workers need to communicate English. Studying English is important for my future, so I must learn English well. I can hear it all over the world.
2. Watching movies and reading English novels
我不懂--》My aim is in order to improve the quality of my life if I study English, I can communicate with foreign friends.
3. Integration into the global community
If I don't learn English, I cannot integrate into the world. It is like being illiterate. I will not be able to see many beautiful places in the world.

---如果你告诉你的理由,用“我”,“我的.” I use changed all the "你" into "我"


4. I won't get lost when I visit foreign countries
If I want to visit beautiful foreign places and eat different kinds of cuisine, I have to learn English.
5. I will stay young when I learn English.  ---真的吗?
If I look at Chinese culture, most of the culture is old-fashioned Chinese culture. Our modern life is the same as in foreign countries. If you read about foreign cultures, you'll find that this world's customs are similar to foreign countries.
6. Communication and making friends
If I learn a different language, I will be able to talk to the locals and have less language barrier. If I only speak Mandarin, I will only talk to Mandarin speakers.

Thank my teacher Efi<--什么? for helping me to correct some wrong sentences!

September 17, 2015
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w Why I want to learn English? b Below are (plural)  is my opinions. reasons. 

English is an international language. It's a bridge to the world.
1. I need to use English for my work.
Many foreign traders and financial workers need to use communicate in English. Studying English is important for my future, so I must learn English well. You can hear it all over the world.
2. Watching movies and reading English novels
My aim is in order to improve the quality of the my life if I study English, I can communicate with foreign friends.
3. Integration into the global community
If you don't learn English, you cannot integrate into the world. It is like being illiterate. You won't be able to see many beautiful places in the world.
4. You won't get lost when you visit foreign countries.
If you want to visit beautiful foreign places and eat different kinds of cuisine, you have to learn English.
5. You will stay young when I you learn English.
If you look at Chinese culture, most of the culture is old-fashioned Chinese culture. Our modern life is the same as in foreign countries. If you read about foreign cultures, you'll find that this world's customs are similar to foreign countries.
6. Communication and making friends
If you learn a different language, you will be able to talk to people who can speak that language. If you only speak only Mandarin, you will only talk to people who can speak Mandarin speakers.

Thank my teacher Efi for helping me to correct some wrong sentences!

 

Really nice job. You had just a few mistakes. 

If you have any questions, feel free to ask me. 

Have a nice day.

September 19, 2015

why I want to learn English? below is my opinions.

English is an international language. It's a bridge to the world.
1. I need to use English for my work.
Many foreign traders and financial workers need to use English. Studying English is important for my future, so I must learn English well. You can hear it all over the world.
2. Watching movies and reading English novels
My aim is in order to improve the quality of the life if I study English, I can communicate with foreign friends.
3. Integration into the global community
If you don't learn English, you cannot integrate into the world. It is like being illiterate. You won't be able to see many beautiful places in the world.
4. You won't get lost when you visit foreign countries
If you want to visit beautiful foreign places and eat different kinds of cuisine, you have to learn English.
5. You will stay young when you learn English.
If you look at Chinese culture, most is old-fashioned Chinese culture. Our modern life is the same as in foreign countries. If you read about foreign cultures, you'll find that this world's customs are similar to foreign countries.
6. Communication and making friends
If you learn a different language, you will be able to talk to people who can speak that language. If you only speak Mandarin, you will only talk to people who can speak Mandarin.

September 27, 2015
A well thought out list Elvin. :)
September 17, 2015
I agree, Elvin! I began learning Mandarin last year for fun, and next week, I'll be taking my first trip to China! Studying several foreign languages has allowed me to meet new people and travel to several beautiful places. Nice work! Please continue to write notebook entries- I'm interested in hearing more about what you have to say :)
September 16, 2015
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