some people think all the new buildings should be built in traditional style? Actually, I wrote this composition for ielts test practice . I am not very good at writing and have no confidence in getting a satisfactory score in the test . so hope anyone can help me correct it and give some advice. Topic:some people think all the new buildings should be built in traditional style? to what extend do you agree? It is fiercely discussed weather all the new buildings should be built in traditional style. The fact that modern buildings are prevalent proves modern style has its own advantages. In my country ,population explosion has been a headache and the following problem is where to settle those those extra citizens. Since the land is limited ,one good solution is replacing those old buildings which occupy large space with tall and thin modern buildings. Also ,modern buildings usually have the same and simple structure so that they can be finished in a relatively short time, compared to the traditional ones. As a result ,modern buildings augment the efficiency and make it possible to meet the increasing large demand of house nowadays. Furthermore, as modern buildings are always applied with advanced technology and theories ,people can gain more security when living in such environment. On the other hand ,many people still strongly recommend the traditional style. Specifically ,unlike the modern style which can be seen everywhere ,traditional buildings representing unique national culture only exist in certain countries. In this way ,those building can be built for special use like tourist attractions. This would bring a great profit and earn the country a good fame. In addition , buildings with traditional sense is a good way to memorize the past history and display the ancient scenes. In conclusion , some new buildings are necessary to be built in traditional style but not all the buildings. Modern buildings still play the key role in today’s society and will gradually expand its affect zone .