IELTS Letter for GT writing task 1. Correct me, please You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for th

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IELTS Letter for GT writing task 1. Correct me, please You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: • introduce yourself • explain what experience and special skills you have • explain why you are interested in the job Write at least 150 words. Dear Sir, My name is Amanda Finch and I am in the final year studying Engineering at Charls Darwin Univercity. I have seen an advertisement published in the newspaper on last Friday about the vacancy available in your City Museum shop. This is the reason, I am writing to you now as I am looking for a part time job during the summer holidays. I am extremly good at adding up and speak English quite well. Moreover, last year I worked in a restaurant serving tourists from all over the world, due of that I obtained communication skills. I am very keen on history and I have been more than once in your museum as well. I know the value of a museum and its advantages to the public. Therefore, I could to increase the number of customers attend every day. The reason for applying this position is to utilize my holidays as meaningful. I would be grateful to you, if you consider me for this position. I look forward to hearing soon from you. Yours faithfully, Amanda Finch

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IELTS Letter for GT writing task 1. Correct me, please

You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays.
You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• explain what experience and special skills you have
• explain why you are interested in the job
Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir,

My name is Amanda Finch and I am in the my final year of studying Engineering at Charles Darwin University. I have seen an advertisement published in the newspaper on last Friday about the vacancy available in your City Museum shop. This is the reason, I am writing to you now as I am looking for a part time job during the summer holidays.
I am extremly good at adding up maths (instead of "maths," you can also say "business transactions") and I speak English quite well. Moreover, last year I worked in a restaurant serving tourists from all over the world, due because of that I obtained communication skills. I am very keen on history and I have been more than once in your museum more than once as well. I know the value of a museum and its advantages to the public. Therefore, I could help to increase the number of customers attend visiting every day.
The My reason for applying for this position is to utilize my holidays as meaningful. I would be grateful to you, if you consider me for this position. I look forward to hearing soon from you.

Yours faithfully,
Amanda Finch