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李灵 Li Ling
New year's Will Need correction! New year's will. The next one please be as wired as me: I always appear strong but very fragile, Others may feel I am stubborn indeed very obedient, I like being at home for long, like travelling far for long also, I admire the cute girls but can't help rushing machines with men in the gym, I hope love, while I don't trust men so much, I don't trust men so much, but I gave seriously everytime, I feel I won't love any more, but I often feel some guy is good, I like sleeping naked, but I always feel getting cold, I hope someone sleep by my side, but I don't like sharing my sheet, I hope to be accompanied, but I always say I need a cat or dog, I never think to make vows can work, but I am making a vow. 新年愿望: 下一个人拜托和我一样神经质。 看起来很坚强,其实很脆弱, 感觉很倔强,其实很顺从, 很能宅,却很喜欢旅行, 羡慕软妹子,却忍不住跑去健身房和男人抢器械, 渴望爱情,却不那么相信男人, 不相信男人,但每一次都认真的付出, 总是说不会再爱了,不经意间却会觉得某某很不错, 喜欢裸睡,却觉得容易着凉, 希望有人睡在边上,却不愿意分享我的被子, 希望有人陪伴,嘴上总是说我想要只猫或者狗, 从来不觉得许愿有用,却在这里许愿。
Jan 3, 2016 5:01 AM
Corrections · 3

lillian, I don't speak Chinese so I am not sure the correct translation.  But I reworded it to sound more like I would expect it to be said in English.  I hope it gives you some ideas.

 

I always appear strong but very fragile,
Others may feel I am stubborn, but I am indeed very obedient,
I like being at home for long, but I like travelling far for long also,
I admire the cute girls, but can't help rushing machines with also admirning men in the gym,
I hope for love, while but I don't trust men so much,
I don't trust men so much, but I gave seriously try sincerely everytime,
I feel like I won't love again any more, but then I often feel some guy is good worth loving,
I like sleeping naked, but I always feel getting get cold,
I hope for someone to sleep by my side, but I don't like sharing my sheets,
I hope to be accompanied for companionship, but I always say I need a cat or dog,
I never think to make making vows can work, but I am making a vow.
新年愿望:
下一个人拜托和我一样神经质。
看起来很坚强,其实很脆弱,
感觉很倔强,其实很顺从,
很能宅,却很喜欢旅行,
羡慕软妹子,却忍不住跑去健身房和男人抢器械,
渴望爱情,却不那么相信男人,
不相信男人,但每一次都认真的付出,
总是说不会再爱了,不经意间却会觉得某某很不错,
喜欢裸睡,却觉得容易着凉,
希望有人睡在边上,却不愿意分享我的被子,
希望有人陪伴,嘴上总是说我想要只猫或者狗,
从来不觉得许愿有用,却在这里许愿。

January 3, 2016
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