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If U were an animal, what animal would you like to become??
Hi guys,
The topic which I choose is the second one. If I were an animal, I would like to become a … What animal are you thinking about? You’ll get the answer at the last line of this essay, but I will reveal in advance, it’s not only a very lovely animal in the world, but also a coldly animal.
There are many common characteristics between us. What you think about it, maybe they exist in my soul and shape. Not at all, but can add up to 90 percent.
Let’s talk about my body shape. It’s difficult to judge that it will be more beautiful if it’s thin or fat. But I’ve never seen a fat animal without some lovely things. I’m fat, but it was me about 1 year ago. Actually, i was not too fat, just enough for other look at me without any bad scheme, even people likes to make familiar with me.
Comparing the shape between human and animal, it’s a very clear difference. But characteristics are the same often, as people believes that inside human brings the characteristics familiar with animals’. Sometimes, I think, my thoughts and acts are similar to a monkey - I was born in 1992 (which has been represented by a Golden Monkey). But it’s not the answer. It’s appeared in my mind when I’ve read a half topic immediately. Not because of I want to own its characteristics, but it’s characteristics and mine are similar. And I want to be myself. It’s lazy, it’s hard-working, it’s gentle, it’s snappy, it’s quite, sometimes it’s cold. It gets angry easily, but never act hastily. It always keeps passions inside: eating, sleeping, being hugged, being loved. And me, I always keep a passion in learning languages.
The last thing, If I could be an animal, I would be a Cat!
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Thanks for your correction :D
P/S: I'm afraid of making other misunderstanding because this essay's structure isn't normal. Do you find it's hard to understand?
Mar 26, 2016 3:36 AM
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If U were an animal, what animal would you like to be??
Hi guys,The topic which I choose is the second one. If I were an animal, I would like to become a … What animal are you thinking about? You’ll get the answer at the last line of this essay, but I will reveal in advance, it’s not only a very lovely animal but also it's cold.
There are many common characteristics between us. Do you think that maybe they exist in my soul and shape. Not at all, but (?) can add up to 90 percent.
Let’s talk about my body shape. It’s difficult to judge that it will be more beautiful if it’s thin or fat. But I’ve never seen a fat animal without some lovely things. I’m fat, but it was me about 1 year ago. Actually, i was not too fat, just enough for others to look at me without any bad regards, even people liked to be familiar with me.
Comparing the shape between human and animal, it’s a very clear difference. But characteristics are the same often, as people believe that inside human beings are characteristics similar to animals. Sometimes, I think, my thoughts and acts are similar to a monkey - I was born in 1992 (which has been represented by a Golden Monkey). But it’s not the answer. It’s appeared in my mind when I’ve read a half topic immediately. Not because I want to own its characteristics, but it’s characteristics and mine are similar. And I want to be myself. It’s lazy, it’s hard-working, it’s gentle, it’s snappy, it’s quiet and sometimes it’s cold. It gets angry easily, but never acts hastily. It always keeps its passions inside: eating, sleeping, being hugged, being loved. And me, I always keep a passion in learning languages.
The last thing, If I could be an animal, I would be a Cat!
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Thanks for your correction :D
P/S: I'm afraid of being misunderstood because this essay's structure isn't normal. Do you find it hard to understand? (Maybe a little but not a lot, I think)
March 26, 2016
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