Diary-94 (Gaddafi Female Gorillas) "Gaddafi Female Gorillas" is also called "Amazone Escort", they are all master soldier and have a loyalty to Gaddafi. Gaddafi Female Gorillas' members all graduated

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Diary-94 (Gaddafi Female Gorillas) "Gaddafi Female Gorillas" is also called "Amazone Escort", they are all master soldier and have a loyalty to Gaddafi. Gaddafi Female Gorillas' members all graduated from female military acodemy in Tripoli. They protects Gaddafi for twenty-four hours all weather personal protection. They guarded Gaddafi whenever Gaddafi went our. On March 20, 2011. There were two group female gorillas members broke into the anti-government millitants headquarters 300 meters away by the civilian cars, sparking fierce clash with anti-government millitants. Thank you for your patience.

Mar 28, 2011 1:07 PM

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In this article "Gorillas" should probably be "guerrillas". It's the Spanish word for "war combatants" but in English means something like rebel "soldiers". Hope that helps.

March 29, 2011

Diary-94 (Gaddafi Female Gorillas)

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On March 20, 2011. There were two groups of female gorillas members who broke into the anti-government millitant's headquarters 300 meters away by using (with) civilian cars, sparking a fierce clash with anti-government millitants.

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