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Diana Vaca Dranca
Accepting an invitation / Someone can check and correct my homework please? thanks Dear Dany. Great to hear from you! In mex, city everything is fine! your weekend holidays in your becah´s house, sounds amazing, and I´m so grateful for the with you and specially with your family for the invitation. Of course I acept to go, in fact I´m very anxious to see you, besides i can´t wait for these delicious dishes that you talked me about and the trip for the coast. I only have a quiestion about, could I invit to my sister?, she has heard some comments about my trip and i guess she´s pretty interested to know your house too, don´t worry, she´s very calm and friendly, besides I´ve thought she can play with your cousins. I expect your answer about. If everything will be o.k, we are arriving the friday at 6:30 in the bus station, you will can recognize me because I will suit a red hat. Thank you for your invitation again, I ´m really sure that visit will be totally realxing and healthy for us, specially with all the nice attention of your family. Cant wait to see you. Regards

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Dear Dany.

So great to hear from you! In Mexico City everything is fine!

Weekend holidays in your grandma's house sound amazing, and I'm so grateful with you and especially with your family for the invitation.

Of course I accept it; in fact I'm very anxious to see you, besides I can't wait to taste those delicious dishes that you told me about and for the trip to the coast.

I only have one question: can I invite my sister as well? She heard some comments about my trip and I guess she's pretty interested to see your house too. But don't worry, she's very calm and friendly, besides I've thought she can play with your cousins. I am looking forward to your answer regarding this.

If everything will be ok, we will be arriving on Friday at 6:30 at the bus station, you can recognize me because I will wear a red hat.

Thank you for your invitation again, I'm really sure that the visit will be totally relaxing and healthy for us, especially with all the nice attention of your family.

 Looking forward to see you,

Regards

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