My cat Russell Please be free to correct my mistakes, I'll love it. My cat Russell was found in 2010. He had no family, so, I took him to live with me. He is a handsome cat, very energetic and lovely

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My cat Russell Please be free to correct my mistakes, I'll love it. My cat Russell was found in 2010. He had no family, so, I took him to live with me. He is a handsome cat, very energetic and lovely. Loves milk and wakes me up every day to ask me some milk. I think that's all. And you guys, do you have any pets? Tell me about them!

Apr 27, 2011 1:32 AM

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My cat Russell

Please be free to correct my mistakes, I'll love it. (I would love it. or I'd love it.)

My cat Russell was found in 2010.
He had no family, so, I took him (home) to live with me.
He is a handsome cat, very energetic and lovely.
He loves milk and wakes me up every day to ask me for some milk.
I think that's all.
And you guys, do you have any pets?
Tell me about them!

We always ask 'for' things.
I want to ask (you) for your help.
He asked me for money.

You need a pronoun at least once in a sentence. It is not needed again in the same sentence.
He loves milk and (he) wakes me up...

April 27, 2011

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