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Lily
Composition 7AB
Please correct any grammatical errors in my writing. It’s for high school students, so sentences should not be too complicated. Thanks!
My parents helped me to overcome my difficult times.
I often see Japanese people taking pictures each other forever.
Parents can make their children go to the desk, however, it's up to the children whether they really study or not.
I think interesting books and movies leave stronger impression if you talk about or discuss it with your friends.
Oct 1, 2017 3:58 PM
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Composition 7AB
Please correct any grammatical errors in my writing. It’s for high school students, so sentences should not be too complicated. Thanks!My parents helped me to overcome my difficult times.
I often see Japanese people taking pictures of each other forever.
(英語のforeverはたいてい延々にになります。) a better word would be "a lot"
Parents can make their children go to the desk, however, it's up to the children whether they really study or not.
(go to the desk isn't used much in English, a more common phrase would be "go to their rooms")
I think interesting books and movies leave stronger impression if you talk about or discuss it with your friends.
(" leave stronger impressions" or " leave a stronger impression")
I hope your lesson/homework goes well!
October 1, 2017
Maybe, "taking pictures OF each other"?
October 1, 2017
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Lily
Language Skills
English, Japanese, Turkish
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