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sanmi
My self-introduction
Hey, everyone .
My name is Yao and I'm from China .
I live in an apartment .
I live on the 18th floor and there is an elevator .
I usually get up at 7:00am in the morning because I have to go to work at 8:00.
Sometimes I make breakfast at home and sometimes buy breakfast on the way to work .
(Chinese food really good and good .)
After breakfast I go to work , my office is very close to my apartment .
So I usually walk to work .
I don't have many friends ( I have a couple of friends )
So I always alone , but I feel it's good and I enjoy it .
Then I will have more time to study .
I like coffee and fruit . I also like Chinese flower tea .
Sometimes I like to go to beautiful places and take some photos .
I have a lot to say but I can only know a little English .
In the last , I hope I will speak English fairly well in the future .
Dec 29, 2017 4:13 PM
Corrections · 5
Great job! Phillip's corrections are great, too. The only thing I would add is:
<strike>In the last</strike> Lastly, I hope I will speak English fairly well in the future .
<strike>In the last</strike> Lastly, I hope I will speak English fairly well in the future .
December 29, 2017
My self-introduction
Hey, everyone .My name is Yao and I'm from China .
I live in an apartment .
I live on the 18th floor and there is an elevator .
I usually get up at 7:00am in the morning because I have to go to work at 8:00.
Sometimes I make breakfast at home and sometimes I buy breakfast on the way to work .
(Chinese food really good and good .)
(I’m not sure what you’re trying to say? Chinese food is really good! Or, Chinese food tastes good and is good for you.)
After breakfast I go to work , my office is very close to my apartment .
So I usually walk to work .
I don't have many friends ( I have a couple of friends )
So I am always alone , but I feel it's good and I enjoy it .
Then This way I will have more time to study .
I like coffee and fruit . I also like Chinese flower tea .
Sometimes I like to go to beautiful places and take some photos .
I have a lot to say but I can only know a little English .
In the last , I hope I will speak English fairly well in the future .
GOOD JOB! Nice summary, Philip
December 29, 2017
Great job! Phillip's corrections are great, too. The only thing I would add is:
<strike>In the last</strike> Lastly, I hope I will speak English fairly well in the future .
<strike>In the last</strike> Lastly, I hope I will speak English fairly well in the future .
December 29, 2017
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sanmi
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English
Learning Language
English
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