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It's not easy to find a satisfactory and well-paid job; because the competition is very big fierce. Especially in the regions with high unemployment rates.I would advise you to put on wear elegant professional clothes. You should also be calm and answer questions profoundly thoughfully.
Jim has got a new job. He managed to find one on the Internet. He had to meet with other people who applied for this job applicants. He had to show that he was a the proper best person for the job, had good qualifications and was experienced had the experience necessary. He also had to persuade recruiters that he fullfilled expectations.
When was the last time that you fell in love?
Who did you fall in love with?
Did you fall in love with Steve?
Thanks in advance!
Notes:
1- Elegant clothes would be used more for going on a date or a formal event. For this reason, I recommend using "professional" instead.
2- "When was the last time that you fell in love?" is not wrong but removing "that" gives the sentence a better flow.
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It's not easy to find a satisfying and well-paying job because the competition is very high. Especially in the regions with high unemployment rates.While 'the competition is very big' is grammatically correct, 'the competition is very high' sounds more natural.
I would advise you to put on sophisticated clothes. You should also be calm and answer questions thoroughly.
Just suggestions for adjectives that sound more natural in this context.
Jim has got a new job. He managed to find one on the Internet. He had to meet with other people who applied for the job. He had to show that he was a professional person, had good qualifications and was experienced. He also had to persuade the recruiter that he can fulfill expectations.
When was the last time that you fell in love?
Who did you fall in love with?
Did you fall in love with Steve?
Thanks in advance!
Good job! The corrections I made are mainly suggestions.
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It is hard to find a satisfactory and well-paid job because job competition is very big, especially in those regions with high unemployment rates.I would advise you to put on elegant clothes. You should also be calm and answer questions fully.
Jim has found a new job. He managed to find one on the Internet. He had to meet with other job applicants. He had to show that he was a proper person, had good qualifications and was experienced. He also had to persuade the recruiter that he fullfilled expectations.
When was the last time that you fell in love?
Who did you fall in love with?
Did you fall in love with Steve?
Thanks in advance!
very well written!
