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IELTS ... Writing Task 1 Academic
The line graph and pie chart show information of plant and animal, which was extincted or likely to extinct from several causes.
Firstly, the line graph predicts that endangered plants and animals will increase over 100 years, especially in tropical forests.
According to the line graph, the number of plants and animals are threatened likely to rise up every decade.
Besides, that trend will peak in 2060, with figures reaching 50,000 million species.
What causes are threat, is shown by pie chart.
There are two main causes, HUMAN IMPACT and NATURAL EVENTS.
HUMAN IMPACT threat are occupied around 80%, the other 20% reason contain natural disasters and other natural events.
In conclusion, the main reason is agriculture among HUMAN IMPACT.
In addition, endangered animals and plants will fall down between 2060 and 2100.
Having said that, we have to take agriculture into account in the future.
Aug 21, 2018 12:10 PM
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IELTS ... Writing Task 1 Academic
The line graph and pie chart show information about plants and animals, which went extincted or are likely to become extinct from several causes.Firstly, the line graph predicts that endangered plants and animals will increase over 100 years, especially in tropical forests.
According to the line graph, the number of plants and animals that are threatened is likely to rise up every decade.
That trend will peak in 2060, with figures reaching 50,000 million species.
What causes are threat, is shown by pie chart. The pie chart shows threats to plants.
There are two main causes, human impact and natural events.
HUMAN IMPACT threat are occupied around 80%, the other 20% reason contain natural disasters and other natural events.
Human impact is around 80% of the pie chart. The other 20% of the pie chart is natural disasters and events.
In conclusion, the main reason is agriculture among HUMAN IMPACT. human impact of agriculture.
In addition, the rate of endangered animals and plants will decrease between 2060 and 2100.
Based on this information, we have to take agriculture into account in the future.
August 21, 2018
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Tetsuhiro
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English, Japanese
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