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Nobody remember my birthday today! Last night went sleep earlier hoping that the next day (today) will be a great day for me because it's my birthday but when i woke up in the morning, I grabbed my phone immediately with a big smile and checked my all my social networks like facebook, instagram and so on but guess what? Nobody wished me a "happy birthday" I am so disappointed and sad. I thought there were so many messages popped up but nothing! I drove to work as usual, i was thinking maybe they would give a surprise there but once again.. nobody even remembered or noticed my birthday. I asked my co-workers if they would like to hang out tonight and have dinner together but they said " No, I am busy tonight," I am kinda sad but nevermind I am used to that. I just dont understand why i have to be like this , always alone on my birthday. I sent a lot of messages to my friends inviting them to come over because i have cooked something special for them but until now, nobody knocked my door house. My birthday is almost over but I am still waiting for them to come. i would be so happy and mean a lot to me if someone knocked the door and say " Happy Birthday Evord" and give me a friendly hug but i dont think so. :(

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Nobody Remembered My Birthday Today!   [In the main title always capitalize the first, last, and all important words.]

Last night I went to sleep earlier hoping that the next day (today) will be a great day for me because it's my birthday, but when I woke up in the morning, I grabbed my phone immediately with a big smile and checked all my social networks like Facebook, Instagram and so on but guess what? Nobody wished me a "Happy birthday". I am so disappointed and sad. I thought there would be so many messages popping up, but nothing! I drove to work as usual, and I was thinking maybe they would give me a surprise there, but once again.. nobody even remembered or noticed my birthday. I asked my co-workers if they would like to hang out tonight and have dinner together but they said "No, I am busy tonight." I am kinda sad but, never mind, I am used to that. I just dont understand why I have to be like this, always alone on my birthday. I sent a lot of messages to my friends inviting them to come over because I have cooked something special for them, but until now, nobody has knocked on my house door. My birthday is almost over but I am still waiting for them to come. I would be so happy and it would mean a lot to me if someone knocked on the door and said "Happy Birthday Evord" and gave me a friendly hug but I dont think so. :(

[Remember to always capitalize "I".]

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Thank you everybody. :')
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Happy Birthday! Life is beautiful, smile^-^
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Happy birthday to you! :)
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Happy Birthday, Evord! Enjoy the day and spend your time doing something you like the most!:)

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