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Informal letter (CAE)
Dear Joe,
Thanks for your letter. Sorry for my late response but I was extremely busy preparing for my university exams lately. That's such wonderful news that you've finally decided to come to spend a few month in my country and I'm so glad you've chosen my city.
Talking about accommodation, you'll be able to find a place to stay without any problem. You can rent an apartment or a room. I just want you to remember that while lodging in the inner city is usually all too expensive and often lack quality, you can find decent accommodation in the suburbs at quite modest prices.
As for sports, well the winter is coming and it means that Russians are going to do some skiing. If you're interested you can always find all the necessary equipment in the local ski rent. This type of sports is very popular in Russia these days and it will surely give you the opportunity to feel the Russian sports spirit and meet some interesting people as well.
And finally, about this part-time job you're seeking for. Well, my parents have a nice convenience store not far from our house and they are ready to give you a position of cashier! Otherwise, you can find all types of jobs, if you just get on one of the Russian employment websites.
Contact my any time if you have some extra questions. I will be happy to lend you some tips!
Best wishes,
Anna
Oct 22, 2018 6:56 AM
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Dear Joe, Thanks for your letter. Sorry for my late response but I was extremely busy preparing for my university exams lately. That's such wonderful news that you've finally decided to come to spend a few months in my country and I'm so glad you've chosen my city. Talking about accommodation, you'll be able to find a place to stay without any problem. You can rent an apartment or a room. I just want you to remember that while lodging in the inner city is usually all too expensive and often lack quality. You can find decent accommodations in the suburbs at quite modest prices. As for sports, well, the winter is coming and it means that Russians are going to do some skiing. If you're interested, you can always find all the necessary equipment in the local ski rent. This type of sports is very popular in Russia these days and it will surely give you the opportunity to feel the Russian sports spirit and meet some interesting people as well. And finally, about this part-time job you're seeking for, well, my parents have a nice convenience store not far from our house and they are ready to give you the position of cashier! Otherwise, you can find all types of jobs if you just get on one of the Russian employment websites. Contact me any time if you have some extra questions. I will be happy to lend you some tips! Best wishes, Anna
<em>Very minimal mistakes! Great work! Best regards. :)</em>
October 22, 2018
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English, French, Italian, Russian
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