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Vanessa
Making a change Throughout my life, I have always had the same hair. I used to have a curly, blond and long hair. So, one day I decided to change. I looked for different treatments and styling techniques that can be used to change the way hair looks. Fist, I decided from curly make to straight. I saw irons and blow dryers. But those techniques don't last for a long time. Then, I decided to do a chemical treatment. I did a relaxer treatment. This made my curly hair straight and I will get a minimum 3 months. I looked at the mirror and I have missed something. Thus, I thought I little and I have Idea to change that color too. I was blond, but I feel colorless. Subsequently, I had to choose what color. I thought maybe red, or a crazy color. But, I chose a brunet hair. Also, I did a chemical treatment. I will have to be more careful with my hair and use good products to prevent from damaging. I looked at the mirror again and I decide to do just one more change. I cut. I did regrets because will go grow up fast. I am so happy and confident with my new hair.

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Making a change

Throughout my life, I have always had the same hair. I used to have a curly, blond and long hair. So However, one day I decided to change. I looked for different treatments and styling techniques that can could be used to change the way my hair looked.
First, I decided to switch styles from curly make to straight. I saw  looked at irons and blow dryers. But those techniques don't last for a long time. Then, I decided to do a chemical treatment. I did a relaxer treatment. This made my curly hair straight and I will get for a minimum period of 3 months. I looked at into the mirror and I have missed something seemed to be missing. Thus, I thought I a little and I have came up with the Idea to change that the color too. I was blond, but I feel felt colorless. Subsequently, I had to choose what color. I thought maybe red, or a crazy color. But, I chose a brunet hair brown. Also, as I did a chemical treatment. I will have to be more careful with my hair and use good products to prevent it from damaging.
I looked at in the mirror again and I decided to do just one more change. I cut it. I did regrets because will go grow up fast. I am so happy and confident with my new hair.

excelente trabalho! :-)

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