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حسن العلويات
It was very dangerous that day. I was still remembering this situation when I drowned under the sea. The whole story began when we my parents planned to go to the beach accompaning my grandparents. I waded in the water with my brother and grandfather. Suddenly, the sand in the water started to dissolve under my feets. Being drowned for a while was a strange feeling. It was unbelievable since I could breath while drowning! Everyone who I told him didn't believe me. I managed through climbing on my grandfather body. However, my grandfather drowned instead of me and I realized that my brother also drowned. Eventually, my father rescued us all from drowning. It was like I escaped from death, then I ended up crying and wailing.
Jan 5, 2026 12:42 PM
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On that day, i faced a lot of danger.I can still remember this encounter of how I nearly
drowned under the sea. The whole story began when my parents decided to accompany my grandparents to the beach. I waded in the water with my brother and
grandfather. Suddenly, the sand in the water started to dissolve under my feet.
Drowning for a while was a strange feeling. It was unbelievable since I
could breathe as i was drowning! Everyone whom I told could not believe me. I
managed to climb on my grandfather body. However, my grandfather started drowning
instead of me and that's when I realized that my brother was also drowning. Eventually, my father
rescued us all from drowning. It was like I escaped from death, then I ended up
crying and wailing.
Good effort, keep practicing on your word form and tenses.
Jan 6, 2026 5:22 AM
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حسن العلويات
Language Skills
Arabic, English
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English
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