Good morning. I'm planning to go on a trip with my high school friends during the summer vacation. I'm also going to Disney, so I'm thinking about what to wear. I didn't sleep much because I was plann

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Good morning. I'm planning to go on a trip with my high school friends during the summer vacation. I'm also going to Disney, so I'm thinking about what to wear. I didn't sleep much because I was planning that yesterday. I have a part-time job today. It's very hot, but I'll do my best.

Jul 18, 2026 2:24 AM

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Good morning. I’m planning to go on a trip with my high school friends during the summer holidays. I’m also going to Disney, so I’ve been thinking about what to wear. I didn’t get much sleep because I was planning everything yesterday. I have my part-time job today. It’s very hot, but I’ll do my best.

Level: C1. Your writing is clear, fluent, and well organised. You express your plans naturally and use a good variety of sentence structures. Only a few collocations and vocabulary choices needed adjusting to sound more idiomatic in British English. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊

Jul 18, 2026 12:40 PM

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