Today, I went to Universal Studios Japan. It was very crowded. I rode many thrilling attractions. It was really very crowded. And I'm very tired...
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Today, I went to Universal Studios Japan. I rode many thrilling attractions. It was really crowded. And I was very tired.
- You use the sentence “It was very crowded” twice in a very short paragraph, so to advoid repetition, you can omit one of them.
- “It was very crowded” OR “It was really crowded”. We don’t say “It was really very…”
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