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During the period of recent 3 years, I have changed very much. 3 years ago, I was irresponseble, disorganized, reckless and understood nothing about life, so I always rushed into. I used to judje everyone for nothing, it was my completely bad side. But now I became more communicable and sociable person. I realised that everyone has his own lacks and problems, and it isn't in my risht to judje them. I enjoy giving somebody a hand and sharing my emotions and expressions with my friends. I manged to grow up not only in the appearence, but also in the internal way. Now I am more discreet, organised, responsable and purposeful. But if something goes wrong , I don't take it to heart, like 3 years ago, I hope for the best. Next time lucky. I also began to read books to broaden my mind, began to admire the beauty and wonders of nature, art and all the world. In a word, in my opinion I have changed for the best.

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During the period of 3 years, I have changed very much. 3 years ago, I was irresponseble, disorganized, reckless and understood nothing about life, So I always rushed into things. I used to judge everyone for nothing, it was my bad side. But now I have become more communicable and socialized person. I realised that everyone has his own lacks and problems, and it isn't in my right to judge them. I enjoy giving somebody a hand and sharing my emotions, expressions with my friends. I manged to grow up not only in the appearence, but also from the insde. Now I am more discreet, organised, responsable and purposeful.Now if something goes wrong , I don't take it to heart, like 3 years ago; I hope for the best. I would be lucky next time. I have also started to read books to broaden my mind; began to admire the beauty and wonders of nature, art and the world . In a nutshell, in my opinion I have changed for the best.

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For the last 3 years I have changed very much. Three years ago, I was irresponsible, disorganised, reckless and understood nothing about life, so I always rushed into situations. I used to judge everyone for nothing, thus revealing my bad side. But now I became a more communicative and sociable person. I realised that everybody have their own faults and problems, and I don't have the right to judge them. I enjoy giving everybody a hand and sharing my emotions and expressions with my friends. I manged to grow up not only in appearence, but also in the internal way. Now I am more discreet, organised, responsible and purposeful. But if something goes wrong , I don't take it to heart, like 3 years ago. I hope for the best, and expect to be luckier next time. I also began to read books to broaden my mind, began to admire the beauty and wonders of nature, art and all the world. In a nutshell, my opinion is that I have changed for the best.

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During the period of 3 years, I have changed very much. 3 years ago, I was irresponseble, disorganized, reckless and understood nothing about life, So I always rushed into things. I used to judge everyone for nothing, it was my bad side. But now I have become more communicable and socialized person. I realised that everyone has his own lacks and problems, and it isn't in my right to judge them. I enjoy giving somebody a hand and sharing my emotions, expressions with my friends. I manged to grow up not only in the appearence, but also from the insde. Now I am more discreet, organised, responsable and purposeful.Now if something goes wrong , I don't take it to heart, like 3 years ago; I hope for the best. I would be lucky next time. I have also started to read books to broaden my mind; began to admire the beauty and wonders of nature, art and the world . In a nutshell, in my opinion I have changed for the best.