EDITING
EDITING
Q12. The following paragraph has not been edited. There is one error in each line. Identify the error in
each line, and write it along with the error in your answer sheet. The first one has been done as an
example (½ x 6 = 3 marks)
Error answer
Even though I have grown out now out up

(a) I should never forget the days of my childhood. ____ ___
(b) when I can play in the village lanes with my ____ ___
(c) friends. We shall run on the kuchcha roads with our Gilli Danda throughout the day. ____ ___
When I came back home, and my mother can scold me for I looked really dirty. ____ ___

Question

EDITING
EDITING 
Q12. The following paragraph has not been edited. There is one error in each line. Identify the error in 
each line, and write it along with the  error in your answer sheet. The first one has been done as an 
example (½ x 6 = 3 marks)
          Error     answer 
Even though I have grown out now                    out         up
         
(a) I should never forget the days of my childhood. ____      ___
(b) when I can play in the village lanes with my ____     ___
(c) friends. We shall run on the kuchcha roads with our Gilli Danda throughout the day.  ____ ___
               When I came back home, and my mother can scold me for I looked really dirty.  ____ ___

Answer

Even though I have grown out now out up

I don't understand the question are you suppose to fix it and the pick the correct following answer out of the A-C

In that case the correction would be,

Even though I have grown "up" (a) I should never forget the days of my childhood

Answer

none of these sentences make much sense.  
i'm not even sure i understand the ?.  
what are the blanks for?

a.) i guess is OK?  
b.) where i could play in the village lanes with my childhood friends?  
c.) we used to run on the kuccha(??) roads with our  gilli danda(?) throughout the day.

when i came back home, my mother used to scold me for being dirty.

Answer

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