A Chinese sentence that I cannot translate
Hello can you please help me with this sentence ? it s the first time I write a post on italki, if I m wrong you can cancel it. This is the sentence anyway: 企业取得了令人瞩目的成绩. Here the subject is企业right? 企业here s my try: "The enterprises got successfull attracting the attention of the people. " How did the get successfull focusing people attention on them ? Is this the sense?It s the key sentence in a text If I don t get the sense right I don t understand the rest of the text,good souls please help me :(

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A Chinese sentence that I cannot translate
Hello can you please help me with this sentence ? it s the first time I write a post on italki, if I m wrong you can cancel it.  This is the sentence anyway:               企业取得了令人瞩目的成绩.  Here the subject is企业right? 企业here s my try: "The enterprises got successfull attracting the attention of the people. "       How did the get successfull focusing people attention on them ? Is this the sense?It s the key sentence in a text If I don t get the sense right I don t understand the rest of the text,good souls please help me :(

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Hey Selena,the sentence is simple:Subject is *企业*,Predicate verb is *取得了*,Object is *成绩*,Attributive is *令人瞩目的*。*令人瞩目的* modify *成绩*. if despite the attributive,the sentence is 企业取得了成绩,if we want to modify the *成绩*,the sentence is 企业取得了令人瞩目的成绩.Translate it in English:The enterprises have achieved spectacular achievements.

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企业 // 取得了 // 令人瞩目//**的 成绩**.

The enterprises got results THAT/WHICH got people's attention.

Always look for the 的, because the noun following it is your key to deciphering the sentence. 的 is “"that" or "which" -- "the one that" -- something like that. The whole phrase before the 的 is describing the noun following it.

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I think,your translation is not bad,but sometimes Sentences can not be translated literally.Otherwise you would have made it too,complicated And not like real Chinese.Finally the enterprise got outstanding achievement.

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just translate 令人瞩目 as ”remarkable“ is good enough

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The enterprises got successful achievements, attracting the attention of the people.