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How's this poem i just wrote on my own ?? ( Limerick )
Thanks for the people who commented on my last discussion about me needing to write 10 poems and now Ive written one !! ^.^ :D btw im new here so I don't know how to reply to their comments but anyway thanks a lot!
(Limerick : A limerick is a humorous poem consisting of five lines. The first, second, and fifth lines must have seven to ten syllables while rhyming and having the same verbal rhythm. The third and fourth lines only have to have five to seven syllables, and have to rhyme with each other and have the same rhythm. )
So here it is ( inspired by my fav band :D ) :
There's a band called 5 Seconds Of Summer,
Where is full of people with a sense of humor,
Who can all play instruments,
And create funny moments,
As well as steal the heart of parents' young daughter.
I know its not really humorous but this was all I could come up with so could you guys tell me how it is and probably how to make it better/ sound better ??
Jan 2, 2015 3:20 AM
Answers · 2
1
There's a band called 5 Seconds Of Summer,
With guitarists who really are strummers,
They are quite a good band,
Their fans always clap hands,
I want to marry the drummer.
January 2, 2015
I don't think it rhymes :o/
January 2, 2015
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