if you know french look at my card
this is my card in english
i want you to tell me how to say it in french

my name is amal halum
from palestine
im 17 years old
in eleventh grade
i love palestine so much

Question

if you know french look at my card
this is my card in english
i want you to tell me how to say it in french

my name is amal halum
from palestine
im 17 years old
in eleventh grade
i love palestine so much

Answer

Well, I’ll add some modifications, just for additional information:

-my first name is Amal, and my family name is Adhalum = mon prénom est Amal et mon nom est Haulm

-I'm from. Palestine : je suis de la Palestine.

-I’m 17 years old: j'ai 17 ans.

-I'm in the eleventh grade: Je Suis en onzième année. (Be aware the final ‘s’ of suis is silent)

Maybe if you made up a whole assay, it sounds better :-)
Good Luck,

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hello; i am from Algeria.
the answer is:
my name is amal halum: mon nom est amal halum.
from palestine : de la palestine
im 17 years old : 17 ans.
in eleventh grade : en onzième année.
i love palestine so much : j'aime beaucoup la palestine.
if you want more help i am here.

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Hello, i am from Algeria and my name is Adel, I live Palestine too ! 
the answer : 
my name is amal halum: mon nom est amal halum ou ( je m'appelle Halum ) 
from palestine : de Palestine
im 17 years old : j'ai 17 ans. 
in eleventh grade : en onzième année. ( 11eme année )  
i love palestine so much : j'aime beaucoup la palestine. 
JUST KNOW THAT OUR HEARTS ARE THERE ! IF U NEED ANYTHING FEEL FREE TO ASK ME !