Can I say " " I would like to request your kind advice ....?"
Can I say " I would like to request your kind advice on the submitted chapter?"

Thank you in advance!

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Can I say " " I would like to request your kind advice ....?"
Can I say " I would like to request your kind advice on the submitted chapter?"

Thank you in advance!

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If you'd be so kind, I would like to ask your advice

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I would appreciate your advice and thoughts on MY submitted chapter
I would like to have your advice and thoughts on...
I would like to request your kind advice on...
All ok