Samantha
通过这件事我懂得了做人要有责任心 - 可以这样说吗？
这些句子写的对吗？
通过这件事情我懂得了做人要有责任心
经过这件事情我深刻意识到做人要有责任心
这些经验使我变得更加独立
Mar 4, 2016 12:35 AM
Answers · 8
为什么要说成“深刻地”？多个“地”反而不好。
March 10, 2016
写的挺好的啊！记得加逗号就好。
通过这件事情，我懂得了做人要有责任心。 如果想强调“做人要有责任心”，可以在“做人”前加“，”
经过这件事情，我深刻意识到做人要有责任心。
这些经历使我变得更加独立。
March 8, 2016
恩恩，很好
March 6, 2016
这些经验 可以改为 这些经历
March 4, 2016
Very good!
March 4, 2016
Show more
Still haven’t found your answers?
Write down your questions and let the native speakers help you!
Samantha
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, German
Learning Language
Chinese (Mandarin), German
Articles You May Also Like
Why Learning a Second Language Pays Off (Even During Hard Times)
24 likes · 9 Comments
Describing Your Job Role and Responsibilities in English
20 likes · 6 Comments
Phone and Video Call English: Sounding Confident Remotely
46 likes · 12 Comments
More articles
