Laura G
HI Guys I need that you correct me this text Pleasee Thank you Good morning, I am going to teach you to prepare a delicious skewer perfect for any occasion. The ingredients that we need are: • skewer sticks • Our favorite fruits, we chose apple, banana, and grapes • Biscuit sticks • Piece of carrot • Chocolate chips The first thing to do is cut the bananas into slices. We carefully inserting each slice in our stick skewer. Then we put a piece of apple that give the appearance of a hat and finally put a grape on the tip. To decorate, we take the chocolate chips and make eyes and buttons, for the nose we can use a piece of carrot and biscuits sticks for the arms. Finally we enjoy a delicious snowman.
Apr 15, 2016 1:07 AM
Answers · 1
I've written most of my corrections in CAPITAL LETTERS. Near the end I've broken one long sentence into 2 shorter sentences. The first thing to do is cut the bananas into slices. We carefully INSERT each slice ON our SKEWER (omit the word STICK). Then we put a piece of apple that GIVES the appearance of a hat and finally put a grape on the tip. To decorate, we take the chocolate chips and make eyes and buttons. FOR the nose we can use a piece of carrot and BISCUIT sticks for the arms. Finally we enjoy a delicious snowman.
April 15, 2016
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