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Is this haiku grammatically correct? I wanted to make a Japanese haiku for a married couple. Is this correct? 一緒に居る 良くも悪くも 終わりまで
Aug 24, 2016 2:31 PM
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"Haiku" is a three-line poem with seventeen syllables in the pattern of 5-7-5. Also small words include one word. You can count your first line, "Isshoniiru", is "I tsu shi yo ni i ru". But, this is 7 words, so you have to think 5 words.
August 24, 2016
not to forget that haiku has to have a seasonal word, so it is not a haiku in traditional sense.
August 24, 2016
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