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Caprice 涛(Yi Shutao)
Can you help me shorten this passage?I think some sentence of this passage is too long.
Speeding up the construction of social credit system is the important means/method to improve the socialist market economic system, strengthen and innovate the social government, which is of self-significance to enhance the awareness of integrity among members of society, to create/nurture a social credit environment of good faith and finally to make China more competitive in the world. On June 14th 2014, Planning Outline for the Construction of a Social Credit System (2014-2020) was issued/ promulgated, which meant it has become the first national specific-plan for national construction of social credit system.
Aug 3, 2020 3:41 AM
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To be honest I am not entirely sure that you are trying to say because I do not understand in what context you are using this passage, but what I would say is:
Furthering the social credit system is a important method to improve the socialist market of the economic system. It will strengthen and innovate the social government, which is important to enhance the awareness of integrity among members of society. It will create a social credit environment of good faith and finally it will make China more competitive in the world.
On 14 June 2014, the Planning Outline for the Construction of a Social Credit System (2014-2020) was issued, thus it has become the first national specific-plan for the national construction of the social credit system.
August 3, 2020
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Caprice 涛(Yi Shutao)
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), Chinese (Other), English, French
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English, French
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