Carmen 404
WOMEN IN JAZZ Women have had an important role in jazz msic from the beginning; however, there is a stereotype that reduce them only to vocal music: classic blues singers, vocals in swing orchestras and bebop combos, and maybe an ocasional pianist. Though female instrumentalists have obtained important achievements, it never was easy to them to get the complete recognition from jazzmen, and all of this because very similar reasons as the ones defined in the fight for equal rights in laboral world: Victorian ideas of what is the woman place, puritan fears from women a men working together (much more in tours and night shifts), steretipated atribuition of wind instruments to men and string ones to women, men's fear of unemployement when a large number of women could get jobs in their field, male influence networks, almost every agent or joint* owner being a man, paternalism or ignorance from critics, etc. Hence, the fact that numberous women could overcome such obstacles and havetheir place in the history of music is quite remarkable. Nevertheless, like in many subjects, a research and recovery of important female figures that habe been obviated is perentory. (*) Bar, restaurant, club,...
Feb 27, 2024 4:43 PM
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WOMEN IN JAZZ Women have had an important role in jazz msic from the beginning; however, there is a stereotype that reduces them only to vocal music: classic blues singers, vocals in swing orchestras and bebop combos, with maybe an ocasional pianist. Though female instrumentalists have achieved much, it was never easy for them to gain full recognition from jazzmen, and all of this because of very similar reasons to the ones defined in the fight for equal rights in the world of labour: Victorian ideas of what is a woman’s place, puritanical fears about women and men working together (especially during tours and late night gigs), the stereotypical attribution of wind instruments to men and string ones to women, men's fear of unemployment if a large number of women could take jobs in their field, male influence networks, almost every agent or bar owner being a man, paternalism or ignorance by critics, etc. Hence, the fact that numerous women overcame such obstacles and took their place in the history of music is quite remarkable. Nevertheless, as in many subjects, the research and recovery of important female figures that have been obviated(?) is perentory. (?)
Generally this is pretty good. However, some of your sentences are too long and I don’t understand the two words in the last sentence.
February 27, 2024
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