Nice writing Cloe. Don’t forgot to use uppercase letters at the start of each sentence. Here are a few notes on my corrections to help you: You can see I’ve changed ‘thin’ to ‘slim’ because ‘thin’ can have a negative connotation, like perhaps you are too skinny and a bit underfed and unhealthy looking. ‘Slim’ sounds more positive, like you are skinny but in a way that still looks good. I have also changed ‘fat’ to ‘overweight’ as ‘fat’ often sounds harsh and rude. And you’re right, Gong Li does have a great figure. It’s important to try and maintain a healthy weight. A balanced diet and moderate exercise are the way to go. But please don’t hate yourself! 😢 Things are stacked against us in this busy society, and comparing ourselves to celebrities who have teams of personal trainers and dieticians and makeup artists and time and resources to put into looking great and, most of all, photoshop, is bad for our mental and physical health. It’s great to want to be healthy and lose a bit of weight, but you still have the same high value as a person whether you are slim and beautiful or not. 加油 for your English and your healthy lifestyle!

Gong Li, the lady in the photo, is a well-known international actress and my idol!! She has a voluptuous body and always appears elegant and confident. In contrast, I feel I am slightly overweight. I hope to trim my body by eating less and exercising more. But my greedy mouth and lazy body are not helping me. Sigh!!