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wendy
Ok, I am going to share some interesting things happend during my last trip. Before starting the trip, I was very excited and prepared a lot for my trip. including booking hotels and choosing proper trains which were convenient for me . Then I started my trip, in the first few days, I was so energetic and checked all the popular sceneries on my phone, I chose the most positive viewed sceneries to visit.On the way, I would stop by at any time to enjoy tasty food especially the delicious street food.this is one of the most important part of my trip.Of course, buying souvenirs was another interesting thing that worth doing.Maybe showing the souvenirs to my friends can prove that I have been there after I am back. But there are still some details which needs you to pay more attention to, for example, if you can't arrange your time and power well, you will be tired in the last few days of your trip.Luckily, I've never met these troubles.As for me, all my trips seemed like too short,I alwalys had endless sceneries and food to enjoy.Now, I am really eager to have my next trip soon.
Mar 22, 2023 2:56 AM
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Ok, I am going to share a few interesting things that happened during my last trip. Before starting my trip, I was very excited and prepared a lot. I booked hotels and chose trains tickets that were convenient for me. On the first few days of my trip, I was very energetic and checked all the popular sceneries on my phone and chose to visit the most sought-after sceneries. On the way, I would stop at any time to enjoy tasty food especially the delicious street food. This was actually one of the highlights of my trip. Of course, buying souvenirs was another interesting thing that was worth doing. Maybe showing the souvenirs to my friends can prove that I have been there once I am back. But there are still a few details about which you need to be careful, for example, if you can't manage your time and energy, you will be tired in the last few days of your trip. Luckily, I've never had that kind of issues. As for me, all my trips seemed too short, I’ve always had innumerable sceneries and a lot of food to enjoy. Now, I am really eager to go for my next trip.
March 22, 2023
Ok, I am going to share some interesting things that happened during my last trip. Before starting the trip, I was very excited and prepared a lot, including booking hotels and choosing trains which were convenient for me. Then I started my trip. For the first few days, I was so energetic, checking all the popular sights on my phone and choosing the ones with the most positive views to visit [I’m not sure about this one - it depends on the app you used!]. On the way, I would stop at any time to enjoy some tasty food, especially the delicious street food. This was one of the most important parts of my trip. Of course, buying souvenirs was another interesting thing that was worth doing. Maybe showing the souvenirs to my friends can prove that I have been there after I am back? But there are still some details which need more attention - for example, if you can't manage your time and energy well, you will be tired in the last few days of your trip. Luckily, I've never had these troubles. For me, although all my trips have seemed too short, I have always had endless scenery [scenery cannot be plural] and food to enjoy. Now, I am really eager to have my next trip soon.
Nice work! I put some comments in the [ ] above. My only other comment is that you started by talking about your recent trip, but finished by discussing your trips in general. I don’t know about your language, but to me this is a little strange in English. Otherwise, it’s great 😄 let me know if you have any questions!
March 22, 2023
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