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My favourite hobby is writing. I am running my blog on WeChat. When I immerse myself in writing, I feel satisfied. However, it is not easy to keep writing the blog as not too many people read it. I know the pleasure of writing is from what I do, and it does not depend on how other people think about my articles. But sometimes, I desire a sense of identity from others, which makes me feel achieved. Furthermore, I enjoy helping my audiences, and I hope they can get power from my words. What do you think about writing?
P.S. I also like keeping fit and watching TV shows.
Jan 27, 2021 1:20 AM
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My favorite hobby is writing. I am currently running a blog on WeChat. I feel a great sense of satisfaction when I immerse
myself in writing. However, it is not easy to keep writing the
blog as not too many people read it. I know the enjoyment of writing should come from the writing itself and not from what other people think about my articles but
sometimes, I desire a sense of achievement validated by others. Furthermore, I enjoy helping my readers and hope they can be empowered through my words. What are your thoughts about writing? P.S. I also like keeping
fit and watching TV shows.
January 28, 2021
My favourite hobby is writing. I am running my blog on WeChat. When I immerse
myself in writing, I feel satisfied. However, it is not easy to keep writing the
blog as not too many people read it. I know the pleasure of writing is from what
I do, and it does not depend on how other people think about my articles. But
sometimes, I desire a sense of identity from others, which makes me feel
achieved. Furthermore, I enjoy helping my audiences, and I hope they can get
power from my words. What do you think about writing? P.S. I also like keeping
fit and watching TV shows.
.... makes me feel achieved is not correct. Could be .. makes me feel validated ... or ... validates my thoughts.
Something of that nature.
January 27, 2021
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Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English
Learning Language
English
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