Isabella
I bought a new bike today. Since I’m going to middle school I would have to ride a bike. I didn’t know how to ride a bike before this Saturday because my school had a decree that said kids under the age of 13 can’t ride bikes. So I never bothered to learn it until now. I bought beautiful black bike I’m still learning it I can ride it for a mile now which is progress. 
Jul 12, 2022 3:22 PM
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I bought a new bike today. Since I’m going to middle school I will have to ride a bike. I didn’t know how to ride a bike before this Saturday because my school had a decree that said kids under the age of 13 can’t ride bikes. So I never bothered to learn it until now. I bought a beautiful black bike and I’m still learning how to ride it. I can ride it for a mile now which is progress. 
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July 16, 2022
I bought a new bike today. To get to middle school I will have to ride there. I didn’t know how to ride a bike before this Saturday because my school had a rule that said kids under the age of 13 couldn’t ride bikes. So I never bothered to learn how until now. I have bought a beautiful black bike. I’m still learning, but I can ride it for a mile now which is progress. 
Once you learn you won’t forget. If you can ride a mile you can ride ten miles!
July 12, 2022
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