Need some help with translation from english to Spanish

Hi! I'm looking for someone to help me correct my translation of the following English paragraph to Spanish. Thanks!

"Hello, my name is Jeremy and I am an English tutor here on italki. I’m a native of San Francisco, a beautiful city with one of the most diverse linguistic and cultural makeups in the world. Through my experiences learning languages such as Chinese, Spanish and Haitian Creole, I have picked up some unique tricks to mastering languages. Additionally, as an Ivy League educated scholar, I have extensive expertise in English vocabulary, grammar and composition. As your English teacher, I hope to transfer this knowledge to you through fun and engaging lessons that integrate vocabulary, grammar and American culture. Whether you are a student, professional or language enthusiast, I look forward to helping you improve your English language skills."

"Hola, me llamo Jeremy y soy un tutor de inglés en italki. Soy de San Francisco, una ciudad con un composición lingüístico y cultural muy rico. A Través de mi experiencia aprendiendo lenguas diferentes como español, chino y haitiano criollo, he adquirido muchas habilidades para aprender lenguas. Además, como un erudito de la Liga de la hiedra, tengo experiencia amplia en el vocabulario, gramática, y composición de ingles. Espero que como tu tutor, puedo ayudarte mejorar tu habilidad de escuchar, hablar, y escribir en ingles.: