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The Tragedy of OKINAWA in Japan (please correct my sentence)
Have you ever head Okinawa in japan ? Okinawa has surrounded by beautiful sea and has mountain which live in a lot of kind of creature . Before , Being part of japan , this island was known for 琉球 (ryu kyu) as the flourish trading island . It means Okinawa was not part of japan and there is traditional which is different from Japan , long time ago . Time passed and , Okinawa became front of world war 2 and this island was destroyed , many people was killed and unfortunately the tragedy was continued . This island was occupied by America . and what is more , America military base was build in this small island. and until now , This base is working and expanding . Inhabitant people was annoyed by sound of airplane , helicopter .
This island still now is destroyed . I want you to know this tragedy .Ignorance is sin . Please let me know tragedy in this world .
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The style of learning english in japan
Why japanese people could not speak english , even they learned for 6 years at the school . Most Japanese people start leaning english seriously when they are 11 years old . mostly , first They use conversation book to know how to greeting in english . Teacher read aloud text book and student also read aloud after teacher said . And next , teacher said that Lets make a two gloup and practice conversation untill you are able to remember conversation which we did . I think this style is good way to learn english . But , more and more going up school year , conversation plactice is becoming less because most student learn english to enter university or to pass tha exam and what is more , most japanese test to enter university , we dont have to plactice conversation which mean is to pass the entrance exam , we just are able to read englih and listen and litte bit writing . I want to say that after graduate school , we have oppotunity to meet forighner so , we , japanese people have to learn conversation . And uni should include speaking test .
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Please correct my sentence more polite
Excuse me sir , Do you have time? We have a problem that , a little while ago , We have settled with credit card , but , then , something was caused and your credit card was not working , so , We would like to settle with credit card again .May i have your credit card ?
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Please correct my sentence .
今天 朋友 给 我 书包 。他们 听 我 想 买 新 书包 。因为 朋友 想 很 重要 所以 我 很 高兴 。我 想 给 朋友 东西 的 使 他们 高兴 。
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Please correct my sentence .
I really like fishing in my free time.When I was 11, My friend told me that. So, I often used to go out to river to catch a fish. We ride bicycle with putting a rod on my shoulder.Time is passed and We went another school each other and each of them has own new friend and community.Everyone has their old friend . Sometime, Thinking of that brings back memories and that makes me feel nostalgic. .
Please teach me more suitable representation.
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