hello, could anyone please check those sentence? i can help you with your Chinese:)
1: if a company failed to obtain a good employee management system, it will suffer from both explicit loss and people's willingness to work in this place.
2: image that, you are on a beach where packed with people whom are yelling, screaming, playing, and keeping throwing garbage or even peeing in the sea, will you still hold a deep love toward the coast-scenery-holiday?
3: how about the public servant exam? never mention about it! it was so difficult that not only i didn't finish it, but also i'm not sure weather the things i filled in are correct. which caused i have to fill all the last 10 blanks with"C"at the last minute, so terrible!