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Are these sentences ok? It sounds good to get a job in the summer. If you’re really in the mood for gaining money, you can also work in the local market.
March 18, 2021
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Déjà vu The book was about the Mobius band and it said that the Earth is like the Mobius band. So when the comets passing by the earth will create ripples in space-time and all supernatural phenomena, like the phenomenon of “Déjà vu”.
December 22, 2020
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Is this period right? The book was about the Mobius band and it said that the Earth is like the Mobius band. So when the comets passing by the earth will create ripples in space-time and all supernatural phenomena, like the phenomenon of “Déjà vu”.
December 22, 2020
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Can someone correct these sentences?Pleaseee When I was enjoying the silent and cool atmosphere, a comet passed. The science teacher was explaining atoms, but I had felt that he had been explaining the atoms also in another morning. All these things reminded me of a book which I read last summer.
December 22, 2020
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Are this sentences ok? Or there are other ways to esprime them better? 1-The coolest sentence of poetry is “the bell tolls for everyone”, that is everyone's the same. 2-Nowadays there are more and more asocial or selfish people and it makes me remember the poetry “No man is an island”, which we read and discussed last week in the class. Have you ever heard of it?
September 20, 2020
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HELP!! Can someone correct my article? Nowadays there are more and more asocial or selfish people and it makes me remember the poetry “No man is an island”, which we read and discussed last week in the class. Have you ever heard of it? To begin with, in this poetry John Donne talks about the relationship between man and man. The coolest sentence of poetry is “the bell tolls for everyone”, that is everyone's the same. It impressed me a lot because it has a strong sense of equality between people. In a few words the poet draws that the world is completed only with everyone, so we mustn't be selfish, but we must respect each other. In conclusion, I totally agree with the poet. In fact, I think that no one is an island and no one must be an island, because only with the collaboration of everyone we can do more, and also get good results that we didn’t ever imagine. For example, during this period with the covid19, we can keep the number of infections thanks to the collaboration of all citizens. Do you agree with my opinion? What is your consideration ?
September 19, 2020
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La vie de Catherine de Médicis Catherine de Médicis est la fille de Laurent II de Médicis, duc d'Urbino, et de Madeleine de la Tour d'Auvergne. Les Médicis sont une grande famille de mécènes qui financent les artistes et bâtissent les musées. Mais la guerre entre Charles V et François I a bouleversé son destin. En 1533 elle se marie au futur Henri II, qui accède au trône de 1547 à 1559, donc elle devient la reine de France. Avec Henri II, elle a sept enfants, dont quatre fils. Quand Henri II meurt, Catherine devient la régente. Mais la tâche s’avère très difficile car il y a trois clans qui s’affrontent à la cour de France: les protestants, les catholiques et les politiciens. Les années suivantes ont été caractérisées par les luttes entre protestants et catholiques. De plus, ses enfants sont décédés: François II, Charles IX et François. Seulement Henri III reste. Dans les années du règne de Henri III, le popularité du roi était très faible. Catherine ne cesse donc de faire le tour du royaume pour appliquer les édit de paix, comme l’édit de Janvier, et relever la cote de Henri III, même si sans succès. Toutefois, les guerres de religion continuent, et le roi est de plus en plus impopulaire: le 12 mai 1588, appelée journée des barricades, Henri III assiste au soulèvement populaire des parisiens contre lui . Et Catherine, près de 70 ans, peine toujours à rétablir le dialogue. En fin, Catherine se réfugie au château de Blois pour échapper aux tumultes de la capitale et décédé le janvier 1589.
March 12, 2020
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La vie de Catherine de Médicis Catherine de Médicis est la fille de Laurent II de Médicis, duc d'Urbino, et de Madeleine de la Tour d'Auvergne. Les Médicis sont une grande famille de mécènes qui finance les artistes et bâtissent les musées. Mais la guerre entre Charles V et François I avait bouleversé son destin. En 1533 elle se marie au futur Henri II, qui aura l'accession au trône de 1547 à 1559, donc elle deviendra la reine de France. Avec Henri II, elle aura sept enfants, dont quatre fils. Dans la cour française Catherine passe son temps à faire progresser les mœurs rétrogrades. Quand Henri II meurt, Catherine devient la régente. Mais la tâche allait s’avérer très difficile parce que il y a trois clans qui s’affrontent à la cour de France: les protestants, les catholiques et les politiciens. Les années suivantes sont caractérisées par les luttes entre protestants et catholiques. De plus, ses enfants sont décédés: François II, Charles IX et François. Seulement Henri III reste. Dans les années du règne de Henri III, le popularité du roi est très bas. Donc Catherine n’arrête pas de faire le tour du royaume pour appliquer les édit de paix,par exemple l’édit de Janvier, et relever la cote de Henri III, même si sans succès. Toutefois les guerres de religion continue, et le roi est de plus en plus impopulaire: le 12 mai 1588, appelée journée des barricades, Henri III assiste au soulèvement populaire des parisiens contre lui. Et Catherine, à presque 70 ans, est encore de tous les combats pour rétablir le dialogue. En fin, Catherine se réfugier au château de Blois pour fuir les tumultes de la capitale et meurt en 5 janvier 1589.
March 12, 2020
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A letter of application Dear Mrs Sandra Jones, I’m writing to express my interest in your job proposal. I saw your advertisement in the college magazine and I was very impressed with it because I always wanted to be a tour guide. Moreover I found your proposal extremely interesting and I think I would also enjoy myself during the tour. First, I am especially enthusiast to do the tour in English because I am studying at a language high school and I have many certificates in English language. So, I firmly believe I am qualified for this job. Secondly, I place a high value on personal integrity so I can well dealing with the visitors. Furthermore, I am familiar with working as a tour guide considering that the last summer I was volunteering for our city’s tour. I am available at all extra-school hours and if you prefer please contact me by this e-mail ([email protected]). Thank you for your time in considering my letter. Sincerely, Giulia.
February 10, 2020
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A formal email Dear Sir or Madam, I am contacting you to request some information about the three-weekend counseling course at your school. I am studying at a language high school in Italy so I am interested in improving my English skills. I place a high value on personal integrity, moreover I am an extrovert and cheerful person. For these reasons I am sure that a course in an English language school in London will be extremely useful for me. Could you tell me if accommodation with a family not far from the school with no Italian guests is possible? I would particularly like to know if there is good transport to the school. I would also appreciate it if you could inform me about the kind of lessons included in the course, and if excursions and guided visits are provided. In addition, I would be grateful if you could give me some details about the teachers. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Chenya Lu
February 1, 2020
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