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1) I'm looking for a native english speaker. 2) I born in Tianjin,nearby beijing.I work in a denmark corporation ,so i need to promote my English . Could you help me ?Thanks a lot !
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    用词造句 hsk 4 (17)

    (颜色)桌子上有不同颜色的蜡笔。
    (可爱)这两孩子打扮很可爱。
    (收入)虽然他们的收入不高,但是他买了新车。
    (收拾)这个房间每天被服务员收拾收拾
    (失败)员工给老板说明为什么他失败了。
    (失望)他们刚刚分手了,所以她很失望。
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    May 11, 2016
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    E-mail for ask account Good morning to you. And hope you have a nice day. I am Jane, the new colleague of XY in Beijing house. It’s been almost four weeks since I started to work, so I want to know when could I get the email account. So I can invest into work as soon as possible.
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    新年来了。。什么要改变?

    新年来了(“到了”也可以)。。有什么需要改变?

     

    这几年我没写新年的resolutions. 我想,把它写下来有什么意义呢? 一月二号不是没有一月一号那么重要。每天都一样重要,所以一月一号不一定有什么特别的地方。

    这几年我没写新年的期望(结合上下文语境,期望应该是最好的选词)。我想,把它写下来又有什么意义呢?一月二号并不是没有一月一号那么重要,每天都一样重要,所以一月一号并没有什么特别的地方。

    可是我现在觉得这是我的错误。每天都很重要,这个没有改变 - 可是从一月一号开始做某一件事情很容易计算到底几天做了。

    可是我现在觉得这是我的错误。每天都很重要,这个毋庸置疑(感觉“毋庸置疑”比“没有改变”表达更准确),但从一月一号开始做某件事情很容易计算到底几天做完这件事。(原文缺少宾语,也可以用上一位修改的那种表达方式。)


    所以今年我想天天都联系一门语言。不一定是中文 一 可以当????????语或者西班牙语,甚至于英语(读书)。我只是想每天都堵读至少一页的书。

    所以今年我想每天都练习一门语言。不一定是中文,也可能是西班牙语或者英语(阅读),我想每天都读至少一页书。(”我想每天都至少阅读一页书“,原文亦可,不过感觉这样表达更自然。)

     

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    January 5, 2016
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    Could you tell me what's the difference between MODIFY and CHANGE . I don't know how to use both of them, I usually mix up them. Please help me.
    July 9, 2014
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    English + Chinese

    I hope my Chinese is okay? I tried my best. I wrote my English to help assist you.

    -Thank you all for your time and corrections.
    I place my current corrected works onto my blog for people to read and see.
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    Don't think negatively so quickly. Think before making judgement. Sometimes what you are thinking is completely wrong. Have you ever fault yourself for incorrect thinking?

    别过早地消极思考。判定以前想一想。有的时候你的想法完全不对。你是否因为自己错误的意见而自责呢?

    I think I found something wrong in myself and that is why I write. I told myself I write to see the errors in myself, so I can fix it. I will.

    我认为我找到了一个自己的错误,这是我写这篇文章的原因。我告诉我自己,我写这些是为了能找到自己的错误,这样我就可以改正它们。我会的。

    The purpose of self reflection is to actually see the previous actions that you have done in a different light. I actually learned this from a stranger. I'll tell you next time.

    自我反省的目的是从不同角度观察以往的行动。其实,这是我向陌生人学到的。下次会告诉你关于他的事。

    He had told me in the moment you are in distress, you don't see things too clearly. It will take a day or two to see things more clearly when you look back.

    他告诉我在处于困境的时候你看不清楚真相。一、两天过去之后,你就能看得更清楚。

    Before I write my next essay, I always look back at my previous one to see what I have done so far. Looking back, I did find a fault in my writing this time round. I will point it out. It seems like I ran out of patience for a day. I will admit my mistakes.

    写文章以前,我一直会看上一篇文章,所以我能看到我的进步。这回看上篇文章,我看到一个过错。我会指出这个错误。看来我等得不耐烦了。我会承认我的错误。

     

    你的中文太棒了,几乎都不用修改了。

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    July 3, 2014
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    Chinese + English translations (very long)

    First thing, it is not about me.
    Second thing, thank you for your time~
    Third thing, it is extremely long. Look down!

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    Below, I will narrated a encounter that I had. When you work with a lot of people, especially working at a hospital, you meet all types of people.

    下面我讲述我遇到过的一件事。
    当你跟很多人一起工作时,尤其是在医院的时候,你会遇到各种类型各种各样的人。

    If you want to be a doctor, patient is really the key.
    I will try my best to understand. Even if a person do me wrong, I will try my best to understand.

    如果你想要成为一名醫生,耐心真的很关键。
    我会尽力理解他们。即使有人对我有所误解,我也会尽力理解他们。

    At the hospital, I am often assigned a Chinese patient because I am the very few students who are learning Chinese. My oral speech is okay, but they too also know a bit of English, so it all works out. However, this time I made a common mistake.

    我在医院经常被指派为中国病人看病,因为我是我们当中为数不多的学习中文的学生。
    我口语还好,他们也会说一点英文,所以也不会有太大的问题。不过这次我犯了一个常见的错误。

    A person got angry at me for telling her that “Your x-rays will be ready -- later".
    My real meaning was to come tomorrow. She thought she'll get it before she left. She quickly got mad at me and threw a lot of words at me in English. “Saying how come it isn't done? Why are you so slow? Are you trying to make me waste my time? What do you mean tomorrow?”

    有一个人对我大发脾气,因为我告诉她 "Your x-rays will be ready later".我原本的意思是(让她)明天回来拿。可是她以为她在走以前就能拿到。快,她就对我生气了,用英文大声地谩骂我。她骂道“Saying how come it isn't done?"Why are you so slow? Are you trying to make me waste my time? What do you mean tomorrow?”

    I didn't argue back, but I tried my best to calm her down. Eventually she did and left with a frown on her face. I went home that day and was sicken by her attitude. I couldn't help myself, so I wrote it down.

    我没有跟她争(论),我试着让她冷静下来。 慢慢地,她冷静下来了,最后带着一脸的不悦离开了。那天我回到家,因为她的态度感到很不开心。我不知道该怎么发泄,所以就写下来了。

    Looking at my previous writing, I understand her now. I made a mistake.
    She is my responsibility. I made a cultural mistake and cannot blame her.
    I am definitely learning Chinese, and I shouldn't slack.

    回看我的上一篇文章,我就明白了她为何会生气。我犯了一个错。应该由我负责。我犯了一个(文化差异的错误),不能怪她。我确实在学习中文,但我不能放松。因为(这件事),我花更多的时间学习中文。我不想让这种事情再发生了

     

    Excellent.几乎不需要修改,只修改了很小的地方,以便读起来更通顺。

    当我看到"Your x-rays will be ready later"的时候,我也以为应该在当天就可以拿到了。这确实是个文化差异。

    加油!你的中文已经非常棒啦!

    BTW:是不是如果你说"Your x-rays will be ready soon"就代表当天可以拿到报告了?


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    July 3, 2014
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    石室詩士施氏,嗜獅,誓食十獅。
    氏時時適市視獅。
    十時,適十獅適市。
    是時,適施氏適市。
    氏視是十獅,恃矢勢,使是十獅逝世。
    氏拾是十獅屍,適石室。
    石室濕,氏使侍拭石室。
    石室拭,氏始試食是十獅。
    食時,始識是十獅屍,實十石獅屍。
    試釋是事。

     

     

    Translate:

     

    有一位姓施的诗人,他的名号叫石室诗士。他特别嗜好狮子,发誓要吃十头狮子。姓施的常常到市集里看狮子。十点钟,刚好十头狮子来到市集。这时,刚好姓施的(也)来到市集。姓(施)的看这十头狮子,仗着箭的力量,使这十头狮子死了。姓(施)的收拾这十头狮子,到石头做的屋子。石头做的屋子很潮湿,姓(施)的命令侍者擦拭石头做的屋子。石头做的屋子擦(好了),姓(施)的开始尝试吃这十头狮子。吃的时候,才知道这十头狮子,实际上是十座石头做的狮子的尸体。(请)试着解释这件事。

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    July 1, 2014
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    I can provide another one.

     

    《于瑜与余欲渔遇雨》
    (作者:杨富森)

    于瑜欲渔,遇余于寓。语余:“余欲渔于渝淤,与余渔渝欤?”余语于瑜:“余欲鬻玉,俞禹欲玉,余欲遇俞于俞寓。”余与于瑜遇俞于俞寓,逾俞隅,欲鬻玉与俞,遇雨,雨逾俞宇。余语于俞:“余欲渔于渝淤,遇雨俞宇,欲渔欤?鬻玉欤?”于瑜与余御雨于俞寓,俞鬻玉与余禹,雨愈,余与于瑜踽踽逾逾俞宇,渔于渝淤。

     

    translate to modern chinese

     

    于瑜想去钓鱼,到我家找我,对我说:“我想去渝水的滩涂上钓鱼,你和我去吗,”我说:“我打算卖玉,俞禹想买我的玉,我得去他家。”于是我同于瑜一同来到了俞禹家,见到了俞禹,想要把玉卖给他。这时天下起了雨,大雨漫过了俞禹家的房子。我对俞禹说:“我本来打算去渝水的滩涂上钓鱼,现在在你家遇上大雨,是该钓鱼呢?还是卖玉呢?” 于瑜和我在一起在俞禹家避雨,我把玉卖给了俞禹。等雨停了,我和于瑜慢慢走出俞禹的家,去渝水的滩涂上钓鱼。

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    July 1, 2014
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    July 1, 2014
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