La presión de los estudiantes

Ya me dijo mi amigo, quién es el maestro, y que los estudiantes de ahora tienen muchas presiones (Hay muchas presiones de los estudiantes de ahora). Uno de sus los estudiantes suyo,David, le dijo (dejo) que tenía muchas presiones ya que Porque hay muchas clases y las asignaturas en la escuela. Necesita terminar muchas tareas cada día y la  (el) competencia es muy intensa entre todos/para cada uno (a cada uno) .Por eso ,necesita buscar tutoriales de las asignaturas en los fines de semanas.No tiene tiempo libre para hacer algo que quiere ,y no tiene tiempo para jugar tampoco.Suena muy mal (malo). Me recuerda cuando era (fui) niño, yo era  (estuve) muy feliz, porque podía (pude) hacer cualquier cosa que quisiera (quise) y tenía mucho (tuve muchos) tiempo libre. Espero que los estudiantes tengan más tiempo libre los fines de semana  para descansar (Espero que tengan los estudiantes tiempo libre en fines de semanas por descansar).

Muy buen trabajo!!! Continua practicando y felicitaciones.

In your question you missed the letter "e" at the end of "one". And to answer your question, the 1st one is the correct one. You need to have the verb to be in the past "was" after the question word "who" at all times. Glad i could help, and have a wonderful day.

It means that the report was meant to be published and linked with the day of world obesity awareness. It's like saying or using in English "in view of or in the ocassion of". Hope i could help. Have a great day!!

El sol

El sol no sale (se llevanta) y se pone a la misma hora, depende mucho (dependamente) de la ciudad en la que vivas en Canada. La hora  (hoja) cambia dependiendo de la temporada (dependamente de la temporado) también. Por ejemplo, en la provincia de Quebec, el sol sale (se llevanta) a las cinco de la mañana durante el verano y se pone a las nueve de la tarde. En Calgary, durante el verano el sol se pone a las once de la tarde. Al norte de Canada, el sol sale (se llevanta) a las tres de la mañana y se pone a las once y media de la tarde. Hay muchas ventajas y desventajas dependiendo de donde vivas (dependamente adondé que vivas). Cuando (Quando) el sol está  (es) casi todo el tiempo brillando/en el cielo/en su punto más alto (elevado), es muy interesante porque hay muchas luces pero es muy dificil de dormir.

Muy buen trabajo amigo!!! Just that i corrected the word ELEVADO, because i didn't know well what you were trying to convey there, so i wrote down 3 possibilities there which i think could work better. Sigue practicando y que tengas un muy buen día.

Hey man!! what exactly would you be needing? Contact me if you need any help. Have a great day.

Most people eat KFC on Christmas in Japan!

Winter is coming soon!
Speaking of winter, what do you think of it?
When I hear that, I think of Christmas with KFC in Japan. It is a tradition for Japanese to celebrate Christmas eating fried chicken. Is that a funny thing for foreigners, isn’t it? Colonel Sanders starts dressing up as Santa in December. lol
I think it’s because some people realized that fried chicken actually tastes better than roasted chicken. Japan is well known for taking foreign products and ideas and adapting them to suit its domestic taste.
They make reservations as early as November to celebrate Christmas with KFC’s party bucket to avoid the lines at the stores in advance on Christmas.
It’s because KFC in Japan has (have) an amazing marketing strategy too. KFC's catchphrase is always the same: 'You eat KFC on Christmas.' A huge amount of money is spent on its advertising campaign (champaign) and it has lasted so long and plenty of commercials on  the TV have (has) caught on.
Many people eat KFC this year too, except me! lol

Excellent job!!! Interesting cultural tradition, also funny in a way hehe. Keep on working like that. Have a great day!!

Trying to us another verb in context such as "abhor"

Most (part of) people live in big cities, they abhor to visit places where they can find insects.
I abhor to go dancing, let me tell you a little story (history) about my life when i was a kid. I remember when i was in high school, My mother and i had a fight (my mother I fought me), because i didn´t want to go dancing   to (in) my school´s  party (partty).
When i started to college education I abhorred to speak in front of my classmates and professor.

Please, help me. and enjoy every minute from your life. Thanks.

Good job man!! The use of the verb is accurate, another one you could use is "despise" just to give you another verb with similar meaning or resemblance. Hope i could help, Have a great day my friend.