Konstantin
The given map shows two suggested sites for the building of a new supermarket in Garlsdon city. There are two possible places either inside of the city or on the outskirts. Firstly, biggest area of the city is an industry where a railway line runs across the area from the east to the west. In the middle of industrial part, there is Town Center with no traffic zone and two housing areas is located to the north and to the south. Also, the city has three main roads running from the downtown to three disctricts: Hindon to north-east, Bransdon to south-west and Cransdon to south-east. According to the map, a one proposal of the supermarket building layouts within the town center. The second suggested site to the north-west of Garlsdon for the buliding is between a railroad line and main road to Hindon populated by 10 thousand people.
Oct 12, 2020 8:19 PM
Corrections · 4
The given map shows two suggested sites for the building of a new supermarket in Garlsdon city. There are two possible places, either inside of the city, or on the outskirts. Firstly, biggest area of the city is industrial where a railway line runs across the area from the east to the west. In the middle of industrial part, there is the Town Center with a no traffic zone and two housing areas located to the north and to the south. Also, the city has three main roads running from downtown to three disctricts: Hindon to north-east, Bransdon to south-west and Cransdon to south-east. According to the map, one proposal of the supermarket building layouts is within the town center. The second suggested site for the building is to the north-west of Garlsdon between a railroad line and the main road to Hindon populated by 10 thousand people.
Very good! Just some minor grammatical changes. This is complicated subject matter.
October 12, 2020
IELTS??
October 12, 2020
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Konstantin
Language Skills
English, Russian
Learning Language
English