Khaled Bassam
Could someone help me with correcting this rest of a story ? Then, we headed into south to an area close to the Dead sea. There is a canyon there, where people could walk through flowing water inside it. We walked for three hours in it. One of my friends fell and got injured while walking inside the water. He is allergic to blood view, so he got sick when he saw himself bleeding. After that incident, his mood changed until the end of the trip. We were thirsty when we went out of the canyon and there was no and close grocery store. So, we  drove long distance to find water. Then, we moved to Petra and stayed there three hours. We climbed rocks and sat on a high place there to enjoy seeing the archeological sites from altitude.
Oct 21, 2020 1:48 AM
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Could someone help me with correcting this rest of the story? Then, we headed into the south to an area close to the Dead Sea. There is a canyon there, where people could walk through with flowing water inside. We walked for three hours in it. One of my friends fell and got injured while walking inside the water. He is allergic to blood view, so he got sick when he saw himself bleeding. After that incident, his mood changed until the end of the trip. We were thirsty when we went out of the canyon and there were no close grocery stores. So, we drove long distances to find water. Then, we moved to Petra and stayed there for three hours. We climbed rocks and sat on a high place there to enjoy seeing the archeological sites from altitude.
October 21, 2020
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Khaled Bassam
Language Skills
Arabic, English
Learning Language
English