Hanna Yip
Today's weather is pretty good with wind and a bit cool. This is Hong Kong, a city with long summer which contains more than 6 months. Today I can feel that autumn is coming soon. The sky is blue and looks sunny, some of the strangers around are wearing long sleeve shirt but it's not the right time to change all of your colthes to winter unless you are super afraid of cold. However, the autumn here is too short, but I guess some of you might not feel winter in Hong Kong because the tempeture here is still high when compare to other countries. I am so glad that we can start to hike from now till next summer comes.
Oct 7, 2020 12:25 AM
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Today's weather is pretty good with wind and a bit cool. This is Hong Kong, a city with long summer which contains more than 6 months. Today's weather is pretty good. It's a bit windy and cool. This is Hong Kong, a city with summer that lasts more than six months. Today I can feel that autumn is coming soon. The sky is blue and looks sunny, some of the strangers around are wearing long sleeve shirt but it's not the right time to change all of your colthes to winter unless you are super afraid of cold. Today, I can feel that autumn is coming soon. It's sunny, and the sky is blue, but I saw some people wearing long-sleeved shirts. I think it's not yet the right time to do a wardrobe overhaul, unless you are super afraid of cold. However, the autumn here is too short, but I guess some of you might not feel winter in Hong Kong because the tempeture here is still high when compare to other countries. I am so glad that we can start to hike from now till next summer comes. However, the autumn here is too short, and I guess some of you might not feel the winter here in Hong Kong because the temperature here in winter is still high compared to other countries. I am so glad that we can start hiking now till the next summer comes.
October 7, 2020
Today's weather is pretty nice with calming winds and a bit cool. This is Hong Kong, a city which offers more than 6 months of long summers. Today I can feel that autumn is coming soon. The sky is blue and the sunny weather is abound, some of the non locals are wearing long sleeve shirts but it's not the right time to change all of your colthes to winter unless you are really afraid of the cold. The autumns here are too short, but I guess to some of you it might not feel like winter at all in Hong Kong, because the temperature here is still high when compared to other countries. I am so glad that we can start to hike from now until next summer comes.
I am so glad that we can start to hike from now until next summer comes. ( till next summer comes.) “till” is not actually a proper word.... if it “s” actually a word it is very informal Also please note: Although I am definitely a native born English speaker, I am not a perfect judge of excellent English grammar, my specific educational perfection is in electronics engineering and therefore English grammar is secondary when compared with a true English major student. But I have spoken English exclusively in America for over 40 years. So I know what “sounds” proper. Anyway , good luck!
October 12, 2020
Today's weather is pretty (nice,pleasant,amazing) with (mild winds, or calming winds), and a bit cool. This is Hong Kong, a city with long summer(summers) which contains(contain) more than 6 months (of awesome summer days and nights). Today I can feel that autumn is coming soon. The sky is blue and looks sunny, some of the strangers( non locals) ( remove “around”) around are wearing long sleeve shirt(s) but (it is) not the right time to change all of your colthes to winter unless you are super afraid of cold. However, the autumn here is too short, but I guess some of you might not feel winter in Hong Kong because the tempeture here is still high when compare to other countries. I am so glad that we can start to hike from now till next summer comes.
October 12, 2020
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Hanna Yip
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), Chinese (Cantonese), English, Japanese
Learning Language
Chinese (Cantonese), English, Japanese