Teresa
Please help me! Thank u very much ❣️❣️❣️ In the picture above is a sweating boy rushing to the finish line, with a bright smile on his face. What flows through his heart is a great sense of achievement attributed to his perseverance and effort. However, in front of him lies a sign which indicates a new "starting point" and motivates him to continue forging ahead. Apparently, this drawing underlines the meaning that in our life, which is quite similar to this running process, what is needed is sustained effort to pass through different stages and embrace new challenges. Owing to the quickening pace of life, competition is increasingly fierce in all walks of life, stimulating us to get close to new things and pursue one goal after another. Only in this way can we be able to be a person with capabilities and courage to adapt ourselves to different conditions and be strong enough to withstand pressure. On the contrary, remaining static will give rise to serious indulgence, eventually spelling more failures. Also this picture is closely related to us. Upon graduation, it is imperative for us to make a prudent decision about the way we will choose. Either pursuing further study or starting a career requires our perseverance and determination. This is where success comes from.
Oct 29, 2021 3:35 PM
Comments · 1
It’s really good and I understand what you are saying but I would work on improving your fragments, run-ons, and comma splices.
Oct 29, 2021 3:44 PM
Teresa
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), Spanish
Learning Language
Spanish