Do you remember the warmth of the south? Do you remember the sound of the sea? The air full of fragrance of pines, wild herbs and flowers, The drumbeats of a music band in twilight out there on th

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Do you remember the warmth of the south? Do you remember the sound of the sea? The air full of fragrance of pines, wild herbs and flowers, The drumbeats of a music band in twilight out there on the sea coast? Take that all and bring it to me. Words are better than thousands of pictures. They are the keys to millions of notions that have been kept in mind through all our life, And can be brought to light just now and make us smile And speak for hours, sharing this abundance. The pictures are just covers, hiding them behind. All this may stay in web like many other things. To everyone the same, by us - forgotten. Or live between us full of sense in words. The words you'll tell me. Will you tell the words?

Mar 7, 2021 11:17 AM

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Do you remember the warmth of the south? Do you remember the sound of the sea? The air full of the fragrance of pines, wild herbs and flowers, The drumbeats of a music band in the twilight out there on the sea coast (1)? Take all of that (2) and bring it to me. Words are better than thousands of pictures. They are the keys to the millions of notions that have been kept in mind throughout our lives, And can be brought to light just now and make us smile And speak for hours, sharing this abundance. Pictures are just covers, hiding them behind. All this may stay in web (3) like many other things. To everyone the same, by us - forgotten. Or live between us full of sense in words. The words you'll tell me. Will you tell the words?

(1) I don’t think “sea coast” is really said much. Perhaps you could say “out there by the sea” or “out there on the seafront” or “out there on the seashore”. (2) “Take it all” might flow better. (3) on the web (are you taking about the Internet?)

March 7, 2021

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