VANESSA LUCIA FABIAN
The last time I saw my best friend we could never thought that it will be the last time. It was a Sunday morning, we went to the beach in ours bycicles, exploring routes unexplored, it was a sunny day and we were really happy we take some pics and then we returned. In the way I felt from the top of a short hill and she assist me, she was really scare because no one could help because we were alone. At the end we returned really tired, but really happy too it was a new adventure together. And that its the way that I remember her.
Mar 15, 2021 3:47 AM
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The last time I saw my best friend, we could never have known that it would be the last time. It was a Sunday morning and we went to the beach on our bycicles, exploring new routes. It was a sunny day and we were really happy. We took some pics and then returned. On the way, I fell from the top of a short hill and she helped me. She was really scared because we were alone. In the end we returned really tired, but really happy as well. It was a new adventure together. That is the way that I remember her.
Great writing. You used the word "really" a lot. You could always swap it with the words like: very, so, extremely, super, etc. However, your English skills are excellent. What ever happened to her? Did you lose touch?
Mar 15, 2021 4:47 AM
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VANESSA LUCIA FABIAN
Language Skills
English, Spanish
Learning Language
English