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This is an writing exercise about the Response Letter.
The Response Letter includes:
1.The aim of the competition
2.Time and place
3.Process and meaning
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More than pleased to have received your e-mail, in which you are enthusiastic about the race competition held in our school recently, I'm writing to give you a brief introduction.
Aimed at strengthening students'spirits of teamwork, the competition was held on the school playground last Sunday afternoon. In the duration of the competition, every student perseverely ran for the race and carefully passed the sticker to the next runner. Hot as the weather was, cheers and shouts were in the coverage of the whole campus. Not only did the
competition bond a doser relationship between each student, but also it sharpened our will to persist as well as cooperate.
In a nutshell, the activity did offer us a golden opportunity to experience the joy of cooperation. Hope what is said above can give you a better understanding of the race competition.
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How can I make my practical writing more native?
I'll be grateful of your corrections and practical suggestions! 😊
Apr 4, 2024 4:37 PM
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This is an writing exercise about the Response Letter. The Response Letter
includes: 1.The aim of the competition 2.Time and place 3.Process and meaning
———————————————————— More than pleased to have received your e-mail, in which
you are enthusiastic about the race competition held in our school recently, I'm
writing to give you a brief introduction. Aimed at strengthening
students'spirits of teamwork, the competition was held on the school playground
last Sunday afternoon. In the duration of the competition, every student
perseverely ran for the race and carefully passed the sticker to the next
runner. Hot as the weather was, cheers and shouts were in the coverage of the
whole campus. Not only did the competition create a closer relationship between
each student, but also it sharpened our will to persist as well as cooperate. In
a nutshell, the activity did offer us a golden opportunity to experience the joy
of cooperation. Hope what is said above can give you a better understanding of
the race competition. ———————————————————— How can I make my practical writing
more native? I'll be grateful of your corrections and practical suggestions! 😊
This is great! Keep up the good work 😊
April 4, 2024
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